What do you think of my poetry, be honest.?

they obviously contain true feelings, but they are also honest. i like them, and you should continue writing, it can often help be a form of catharsis. the only tips and can give you are to work on your organization a little bit and dont focus so much on rhyme, rhyme does give it rhythm, but you can have rhythm and flow without rhyme, and with your style of writing, it might help you free your thoughts better. keep it up :)